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大家好,请高手给改改,能表达的客气友好但不过分讨好就行了。英文水平不行,尺度自己把握不住,请大家批批。
I am really interested in the field of XXXX and have heard a lot about Red River College from my friends who used to be a student here.
RRC is one of the most successful colleges in Winnipeg and the teaching staff focus on helping students to build a career and enhance quality of their life.
Moreover, personally, I gained lots of help from International Education Office and left me a deep impression of hospitality.
I would be grateful if I could have a chance to be a member of RRC family. |
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