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请高手给改改,能表达客气又不过分就行

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汤圆猪猪 发表于 2010-8-9 03:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
大家好,请高手给改改,能表达的客气友好但不过分讨好就行了。英文水平不行,尺度自己把握不住,请大家批批。

I am really interested in the field of XXXX and have heard a lot about Red River College from my friends who used to be a student here.  

RRC is one of the most successful colleges in Winnipeg and the teaching staff focus on helping students to build a career and enhance quality of their life.

Moreover, personally, I gained lots of help from International Education Office and left me a deep impression of hospitality.

I would be grateful if I could have a chance to be a member of RRC family.

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 楼主| 汤圆猪猪 发表于 2010-8-9 09:16 | 显示全部楼层
晕,看来是过分客气了。我这不是感谢信,是想作为申请信和资料一起递交。
我改改去。
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